«Excellent! I thoroughly enjoyed this film. I was hooked by the quirky tone and off-beat humor. It's reminiscent of the TMO work Timothy Richmond III put out. Some of the jokes had me actually laughing, which is rare in TM machinima! Unlike others have said, I didn't notice any level issues with the VOs. The editing and camerawork are top notch. I'll be sure to check out more work from you. Very promising stuff!»
Out of Print
«Very enjoyable Law. Youi woulda gotten on great on TMO many years ago. This reminds me of the many classics from that time. Music choices worked great for me. Good vos and good camerawork. Editing/pacing coulda been a bit more judicial but overall I enjoyed it and thats saying a lot. Keep on keeping on!»
«Thanks everybody, really appreciate all the feedback, positive or negative. All feedback is positive actually, in my opinion. It's very satisfying to know what worked and what didn't, and I'm going use all the advice I've been given to improve the outcome of whatever project is next for me. Thanks again everybody, my nights been made by the warm reception so far, hope to get even more feedback in the coming days. Out of Print 2 coming soon!
Just kidding »
«Nice! This was well put together with some great writing and jokes and a strong performance from Joe as Scott. You had some nice custom camerawork and really good detailed set dressing - I liked the fact that Scott had newspapers up on his wall, made sense and added to his character. I liked the way you edited the film into distinct "stages" with title cards as well, it helped the story move naturally from scene to scene whilst also allowing you to cut abruptly when needed. As a minor negative, I thought there were one or two jarring edits, particularly *SPOILERS!* when Phillip and Scott are hit by the car *SPOILERS!*. I guess it's one of those that's awkward to translate from page to screen because of The Movies' limitations. I also thought some of the VOs could do with some levelling and editing such as compression and EQ so they were more consistent across the board. I noticed it mostly in conversations between Scott and Phillip - my VOs were quite bassy and made Joe's sound thin and quiet in comparison.. it's difficult with everyone using different setups but sometimes just a little edit can make all the difference
Overall I really enjoyed this! You're progressing quickly and really getting to grips with the program. Looking forward to seeing what's next!»
«Hearing Joe make meow and woof sounds is just great. Ha ha.
This is really well written. Nice choices of music. I like your use of camera angles. Lots of great jokes in this movie, including the one about the mailman. I noticed you did some set dressing, nice work on that. All the voice actors did a great job. I really enjoyed this movie, Leonard. You did a fantastic job. I'm also happy to have been a part of this production and proud to see it released.»
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