«jumped about a little to much, so it made it kinda hard to fllow. this of course makes it hard to get into the characters. the subtitles flash a bit quick, still keep working.»
Johnny (the movies)
«I Think You Should Slow Things Down in Your Movies In The Future.
Everything Moves So Quickly (Subtitles ect. But The Whole Storyline In General)
And I Believe You've Failed To Give The Audience A Detailed Idea About Your Characters' Personality, And Even Thier Names!
Stuff Like That Is Essential In Making A Fun, Interesting Movie That People Wanna Watch.
I Think To Improve The 'Understandability' ( I Don't Think That's A Word... Hee Hee
You Need To 'Drop' The Side Scenes/Events From Your Film (That Bottle Throwing Scene In The Bar ect.) That Have No Real Input To The Storyline...
-Take The Audience's Attention Away From The Broader Storyline And, Therefore, Confuses Them. ( I Totally Lost Track Of The Storyline After About 10minutes)
-Waste Time And Bore The Audience, Therefore Making It Less Likely That People Will Watch The Whole Movie.
I'm Sorry To Have To Say It...
(Though, In Your Defence, Some Of The Subtitles And Random Stuff Did Make Me Laugh!
Also, Towards The End, I Did Start To Re-Grasp The Storyline And There Was A Moderatly Pleasing Ending To Your Film)
3.5 Stars Out Of 5
Thanks For Reading : )»
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