Zara Mystress of Magic
Duration: 6min 21sec
Views: 878
Submitted: 9 years ago
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Zara's amazing feats of magic have made her one of the hottest tickets in town. But now that a homicadal madman has stolen the means to destory the city, it's going to take far more than one feat of magic to save it.
«I agree with the other reviews about the technical things to improve upon with the subtitles and the removal of the mumbling.
This was fun to watch and I like the concept of a magician being the hero. Clever idea. I think this shows good potential but just needs some fine tuning. Continued success and good luck with your future movies! »
«An ambitious project, but it has a couple of major problems.
First, turn off mumbling. It distracts from the subtitles and gets annoying after a while.
Second, the subtitles need to be up longer as said below, and similarly to be more concise and to the point. Trim whatever excess verbiage you can and the story will work better for it.
I'm not sure about the climax, myself- it seems almost a mundane solution to the problem.
Still, it's a good concept, and I think you should definitely run with it. »
«An interesting short movie with a refreshing character. It reminds me a little of THE MAGICIAN starring Bill Bixby where he used magic tricks to thwart bad guys. As a suggestion.... when using subtitles one has to leave them up longer. Yes, it will affect editing, but the story is critical for the viewer. Nice job! Keep on filming!
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