«thanks everyone. I will try to imporve.»
Spider-Man. La Pelicula (Spider-Man: The Movie)
«Not bad. The first thing I must say is that you really shouldn't include the Marvel Studios logo or name out of respect, because your film has no connection with that film studio.
About your film, it is well-shot but is far too familiar, with too much resemblance to the 2002 film and no space for your own ideas to breathe. The lack of dialogue made the film unendurable and next-to-impossible to follow.
Continuity, costumes, scenes and sets are not an issue here, so you have the basic skills required to make yourself into a great film maker. Keep filming
«Hmmm... not too bad for a first movie. One major issue is the fact that there is no dialogue, not even subtitles to help the story. The film is full of conversation scenes with the Movies mumbling sound (which needs to go) and don't tell us what is going on. Because of this, I had to skip ahead to see the story progress. The story did just take most elements from the Spider-man movie, with no originality. Try putting in some of your own elements in future.
Good points - unlike some movie makers, continuity and consistency remains fairly solid, without annoying costume and actor changes, so good work with that. The mods used are fairly good, although you could have put in some more so the film looks more unique visually.
To conclude, a nice movie. Keep it up! »
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