«Very good story and good camera work. If they where big time gangsters I would think they would dress a little better (hahahahaha). I liked the selection and use of your scenes also.»
«Nicely made. I liked the music choices and camerawork, and the editing was good. Nice titles at the start. I didn't like the annoying in-game laughing, etc. Best to get rid of that altogether because it doesn't add anything to the film. Pretty good story, though I think you needed to spend a little more time on the subtitles sorting out errors, etc. Like Chris and Ken say, I think VOs would add a lot to this, and in my opinion it should definitely be your next step. Your movies show a good bit of upside, so keep on filming and you'll get better and better
**** - 4 stars»
The subtitles in some scenes need to stop up longer there also was some problem with the dialog Jackson don't ever mess with my gang again. You shot him with a machine gun i don't think he'll be messing with anything again.
I do agree with Kuroken this would have been better with a cast.
You did a good job with editing and camrea work.
keep filming. »
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