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«The story here was way too vague and difficult to follow.It seemed more like a compilation of clips than a linear story. Deeper thinking into a story would have produced a better outcome, but the film does show you have a fairly decent set of skills using the game.»
«I think you have alot of imagination but your not fleshing it out enough onto the screen. I was not great at making films when I first started either, heck I at first didn't even put subtitles to explain what is going on. But with a little practice and watching something other film makers movies I was able to create movies with some moderate success and understanding. Well give it another go and try to make a movie that will either catch someones attention or blow their minds. Also, I saw the comments you left on Iconmatthew1's "Hard Plastic" you can say it wasn't good, maybe it wasn't, I never seen it but no matter how bad it might have seemed to you you could have put much more nicely. He was only giving you advice.
Keep It Up and You'll come a long way,
«I wanted to send you a private message in reply to the one you sent me but it says your account won't accept private messages so I'll just reply to it here: "Well seeing as I'm 21 years old and that was made when I was a sophomore in high school I think my film making is a bit better than that. Hey I'm just giving you some criticism. How you take it is up to you. "»
«Okay you took the title of one of the greatest films ever made and you really didnt deliver. The subtitles stayed on the screen way too long. The plot was so simple and yet at the same time impossible to follow. Was this supposed to be a comedy? Either way you have a lot of work to do.»
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