This one reminded me of my first film.
The subtitles fly by way too fast, not helped by the unintelligible font used for the female character.
Then there's the mumbling - even I had the sense to turn this off on my very first film over three years ago. I knew instinctively that Sims-ish mumbling would only lead to World War 3 if left unchecked! It's that annoying!
The story needed more attention as well. I didn't get the sense of a complete beginning, middle and end.
Good use of the stock music though, attention was paid to the mood of each scene.
Duration: 5min 11sec Views: 867 Submitted: 10 years ago Submitted by:
Description: An old flame leads a P.I. into a new case. A case that has killed everyone else you has looked into it. Now there is only one choice close the case anfd the thing that escaped form it, or be closed himself.