«I have to agree with you on this, it is kind of rushed but I have been thinking of expanding on the idea with a little better execution, maybe a series of some kind. Though I m glad you liked the concept. Yes that was her parents being burned it unknown why.»
«Cool idea and all, but that was pretty awkward to watch honestly, the fighting especially with the super delayed reactions from the characters. I understand there was a deadline to meet, but this feels extremely rushed to me. Why were those people in that burning house (dance girl's parents I assume) just sitting there all smiles while not only the house was on fire, but they themselves were engulfed in flame? If that was meant to some quirky funny moment, I didn't get that vibe, it just felt really off. The idea of Dance Girl is cool, as are your film ideas most of the time, but the execution here is subpar compared your The Movies output. I wish my review of wasn't so negative, but I'm not going to sit here and lie, honest criticism is the only kind worth giving or receiving.
So don't let this steer you away from making more films, and best of luck with your future projects. »
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«I have to agree with you on this, it is kind of rushed but I have been thinking of expanding on the idea with a little better execution, maybe a series of some kind. Though I m glad you liked the concept. Yes that was her parents being burned it unknown why.»
«Cool idea and all, but that was pretty awkward to watch honestly, the fighting especially with the super delayed reactions from the characters. I understand there was a deadline to meet, but this feels extremely rushed to me. Why were those people in that burning house (dance girl's parents I assume) just sitting there all smiles while not only the house was on fire, but they themselves were engulfed in flame?
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If that was meant to some quirky funny moment, I didn't get that vibe, it just felt really off. The idea of Dance Girl is cool, as are your film ideas most of the time, but the execution here is subpar compared your The Movies output. I wish my review of wasn't so negative, but I'm not going to sit here and lie, honest criticism is the only kind worth giving or receiving.
So don't let this steer you away from making more films, and best of luck with your future projects.
«That dance girl could sure cut a rug...»