«Ok for your first movie wasn't to bad.
There alot of plot holes in the story like why was this guy were he is who was the gay with the gun in the end and why did he shoot him.
work more on your script.
also leave the subtitles up a little longer.
nice camrea work also nice job editing.
keep filming.»

«For your first movie, it shows, but don't worry, because my first film wasn't as good as yours. Some solid suspense building with nice sound in the beginning, especially when the dead aliens were introduced. I was also intrigued by how the guy in the bowler hat fit into the whole thing. However, the story sort of dissolves into random clips, and by the end I really still had no clue what was going on. There's a lot of story flaws and a few overused scenes, but I definitely see potential. Write your scripts out beforehand, it helps so much with making a good story. Get some voice actors instead of using subtitles, and look into getting mods into your films (8eyedbaby is a great site). I don't want to be harsh at all, so let me just say that it's great that you're making your first film, and I'll be looking forward to seeing how you develop your skills. Film on!»

«It was good, but I didn't get the plot? The guy waking up in the jungle and finding the aliens and stuff was great, but I didn't get what the guy with the hat had to do with anything. It ended abruptly which is cool if you plan on making a sequel. Think about doing so!»