«Nt bad. A bit heavy handed and rushed perhaps. The last phone call could have used some time seperation from the shallow lake of death. Also thought the cell shading added little and was more distraction than feature. Had a style and was worth my time.»

«I think I know her.

I like the story. The cellshading effect added to the drama. I am not sure if it was the editing or not but there were way too many 'jumps'. If it was the motions in the program causing the jumpiness, careful editing can correct that.»