«Woah - far far too many fades. Watching this was like watching a flick book! There are other techniques you can use to achieve a similar feel without fading in and out every shot
In one scene, out side the house you could see the top edge of the 'background' and then the rest of the sky was pitch black. you need to carefully consider the camera positioning of such shots.
Doing all of the voices yourself is often a necessity when i new studio starts out. However, it sounds bad especially when a male voice is talking for a female character and when all of the voices sound the same. But fear not, i think you'll be able to get some people to do Vo's for you very soon.
Onto the good stuff.... the tone, pacing and music in this trailer were excellent. I can tell that you put a great deal of thought into exactly what you were making and just how you were going to put that across. If you are able to address the above points i think this could be a very fascinating well made series. Make sure you stop by the forums (if you havent already) because thats the place to get known, ask for help and develop your already evident skills.
«Woah - far far too many fades. Watching this was like watching a flick book! There are other techniques you can use to achieve a similar feel without fading in and out every shot
In one scene, out side the house you could see the top edge of the 'background' and then the rest of the sky was pitch black. you need to carefully consider the camera positioning of such shots.
Doing all of the voices yourself is often a necessity when i new studio starts out. However, it sounds bad especially when a male voice is talking for a female character and when all of the voices sound the same. But fear not, i think you'll be able to get some people to do Vo's for you very soon.
Onto the good stuff.... the tone, pacing and music in this trailer were excellent. I can tell that you put a great deal of thought into exactly what you were making and just how you were going to put that across. If you are able to address the above points i think this could be a very fascinating well made series. Make sure you stop by the forums (if you havent already) because thats the place to get known, ask for help and develop your already evident skills.
cheers»