«I felt it was quite good. Needs trimming in a number of spots, but I pretty much like the sequence of the story. I felt it flowed better from the Flashbacks to the end. I felt the ending was perfect,not to abrupt, I actual said while watch, "at least it's Sara" when the last zombie in the woods appeared. It really felt (thanks to the flashbacks) that he just gave in and was thankful that it was Sara that was the one to kill him.

I will agree the the voices were a bit too "street"»

«It's ok... it's not one of the worst video's I've watched, Of couse theres a lot of things that did not make since and plus the story line was way off base. There wasent enough build up for it to make since. Your sounds were way to loud but they were just right when something happened. The VO was ok but over all I give it 3 stars, If you need a good storyline to work with please message me and I can provide a good one for you and a script... unless people reading thing I have a big ego... God I hope not... But just message me if your interested or anyone else... Because in the movies, anything is possible.»

«Nice vo work need more work with the script nicely edited .
pretty good for your first movie.»

«Pretty good for your first movie. I thought the VOs were great and the music choice mostly worked well. I thought there was quite a bit of lag in terms of the sound effects and sometimes there were places where the volume was far too high either for a sound or a VO.

Otherwise. I'd just go with what the Phantom said, he pretty much covered it. Good luck with your next production

**** - 4 stars»

«The Phantom Says:

Once past the opening title cards, the first shot is a nicely cinematic one, although the panting was a little loud.

The story itself seemed to jump into gear too quickly and popped around a bit too much; the VOs were nice and clear, if a little too "street" for the characters, but you must be careful as there were several places where you spoke far too close to the mike and the sound files suffered from pops and sudden volume hikes as a result.

Some nice camera work; the script was a little stilted, though. Far too many exclamations of "bitch!", for example. Some parts suffered in addition by the use of not entirely appropriate in-game music tracks which detracted from the movie for me. There were also too many in-game fades between scenes, making it a little choppy.

The whole rabbit thing was a little bizarre, but I get what you were trying to show in that sequence; a filter to make it a little more obvious that these were flashbacks would have made it a little less jarring. The ending was also a little too abrupt.

The Phantom Says: a 4; lots to like, little to detract. With a little more care in putting the scenes together and watching your recordings, I expect something really good to come out of your studio in the future.»

«Bravo Bravo movie.It was all cool action your very creative
hey could you comment on my newest movie see what you think

anyway i hope to see more from you and we can work together»