«Ok, from a critical point of view, I feel that the shot of the student reading in the library should have been intercut with the shot of the bully watching him. Also, I felt that the ambulance driving shot was too long and should have been broken up with the radio call intercut with some exterior shots.
Good work all in all.»
The School Bully
Duration: 6min 30sec Views: 792 Submitted: 6 years ago Submitted by:
Description: An extended version of the first movie I uploaded to TMunderground. Not a huge improvement, still so subtitles or voice-overs, and quite a simple plot. Decent, but nothing too special. All you need to know is that a bully beats up a nerd on one day, who later seeks revenge. Again, just adding random crap to expand my channel I guess.