corporate warfare episode 3

Duration: 6min 53sec
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Submitted: 8 years ago
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third in my series and im sorry the quality is much worse but it was to fix a strange sound bug i was having
«Nice music choices, they worked well in setting up an edgy feel right from the start. The writing was pretty good too, definitely an improvement on the previous installments in that respect. At times I thought there were in-game animations which didn't particularly lend themselves to a more serious type of film like this but overall the scene selection was good and I liked the camerawork. The editing was nice, I love the way you switched between the different characters, was a great way of adding tension. The depth of view effects were nice too, I liked the shot panning backwards showing Frank walking down the hallway and the background stretched out behind him. Nice effect. I felt at times there could have been a little more work on the subtitles, in terms of spelling, punctuation, etc just to make it more professional. Overall though, nice work, I enjoyed this one
***** - 5 stars»