Spelling in subs.. if you are going to use subtitles, you MUST check your spelling; type them into a word processor first and check them with that before entering them into your film. Even if English isn't your primary language, if you are going to use English subs, you MUST spell correctly.
Mumbling... I agree with the others; an absolute no-no; a real scene killer.
Credit your modders and music sources; they spent the time to create the music and mods you use in your movies, so give them the credit they deserve.
Scene repetition; if you have Stunts and Effects, use the freecam a little more (I know it's a pain to do sword fights with the one scene that's available, but if you use the freecam and mix the angles up a bit more, use closeups in between and so on, it will break the monotonous flow of seeing the same scene over and over again.
Paced pretty well.
Some good camera work in places (which leads me to suggest that you use it a bit more to break up the fight sequences, but don't go too far the other way and have the camera flying about like a mad thing).
I also agree you should go for VOs, which will take this to the next level. Lots of promise here, so keep up the good work; fantasy is hard to do with TM and you have made a credible stab at it with this series. And remember; take your time with the filming and editing; don't rush anything just to get it out. Patience and effort will reward you with a much better film in the long run.
Emperivum 3:the dark prince
«That was terrific, except.... With great props and backgrounds like this you absolutely have to turn that damned mumbling off. I'm not so concerned with the sub- spelling as I am about the other sound issues. The score was top- shelf, who did it? What is all this "for your consideration " stuff on the right? Get some comments HERE before you nominate yourself for anything. I like this movie, and this series. Nice finale Harry.»
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