«Hmmm, as an episode or movie in its own right, Shape Autum falls short of the mark. It lacks the emotion of the Piolt and instead focuses on driving the plot forwards. I'm starting to think this may work better as one complete movie.
You choice to make this a silent movie + music score was a bold one and mostly works very effectively - except when i hear a school bell. This breaks the atmosphere and ambiance that you have created. The music worked very nicely in this episode - i think the lack of 'tension building' music made more of an impact personally.
As Dulci mentions, flickering subs can be distracting. A more effective method is to use transparent overlays (if you are still doing all your editing in AMM and PP that is). These will give you the freedom to have the subs show any way you want for as long as you want without the flicker.
I'm still finding the series very good and interesting - lets see what the next episode reveals.
Shape - Autumn
Duration: 4min 11sec Views: 1 646 Submitted: 12 years ago Submitted by:
Description: A series strictly for TMU. It's autumn at school and Adrian and Alex fall deeper and deeper into their struggle. I felt the topics within this small series needed to be shown. The episodes may be short, but i have put alot effort in the series. "Shape" is a series about two teenage kids named Adrian and Alex, lost and hurt. Instead of talking about it and seeking help they take matters into their own hands. By the last episode it'll all become clear. This is not based off of any event or story. This creation was my own and if any part of it offends you you have been warned. MODS: 8eyedbaby.com customs props courtesy of www.tiersix.com