«That was pretty good.

When the robber got shot, and he fell to the floor, there was a blood puddle already there. Perhaps it would be better to show the robber falling to the floor, and then cut to another scene, perhaps an overhead shot of the robber, and put the blood puddle underneath his body. Just a suggestion.

I like the voice overs. »

«A real stupid story, told in a similar way a thousand times, a sight of the world, I dislike, conventional camerawork, no real cutting ...... boring ......»

«Fantastic video, the VO's were perfect, as well.
The main character was done very well, in that regard.
You should've made it longer, however, I found that the 6 minute runtime left me wanting more.
5/5»

«The city is a dangerous place, and one jaded cop has had enough.

The joke here is that all the criminals on show are wussies. But they get the severe treatment by the lead cop character anyway!

Charles Bronson doesn't deserve to grace this fella's turf, even in passing through!

A superb performance by the lead here - it's faultless.

An extremely funny spin on the vigilante genre of which I'm very fond!»

«Nice to see it is you Insane/Avester. Thanks for the comment.

As for OzzyBloke, wow, I guess he was speechless! »

«i remember this one from tmo as well. and yes it is insanewarrior but i thought what the heck ill make a new name so yeah. very well done as always. but man this tmo being shut down is killing me ive been on it since like 7th grade and the night i found out it was over i litterally cried.

but atleast we've got this now.

we'll keep in touch.»

«A very nice way of representing a corrupt city. I liked the scene where he says: "You're dead". »

«The plot was strong, the VOs were first-class, and due to some nice camera-work, it flowed nicely. Music was good too, but then maybe I'm biased! :o)»