In Memory
Duration: 1min 24sec
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Submitted: 11 years ago
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Description:
Weighed down by memories last night.
Poem by Emily Dickinson.
Some, too fragile for winter winds
The thoughtful grave encloses --
Tenderly tucking them in from frost
Before their feet are cold.
Never the treasures in her nest
The cautious grave exposes,
Building where schoolboy dare not look,
And sportsman is not bold.
This covert have all the children
Early aged, and often cold,
Sparrows, unnoticed by the Father --
Lambs for whom time had not a fold.
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«some great audio direction in this to bring a weight air of emotion to the forefront.nice use of the echo.»
«That was great! The echo effect was a nie touch!
Have Fun.
F.M.»
«Great use of audio with the gloomy visuals to create an appropriate atmosphere. I did find it hard to understand many of the lines due to the persistent echoes though (good thing you had the text in the film's description). Perhaps it might've worked better if only select lines were echoed for emphasis (like the last lines of the stanzas)? Or if the echoes had a greater delay period so they did not start until the line was finished (making it easier to hear and understand the entire line). Nonetheless this was eerie and reflective. »
«Great atmosphere and I dug the echo.»
«Very nice...
Yep...»
«What's not to like? Great job Ms. Dulci.
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«Dulciland a theme park
i can see a movie coming!
Nice job, consider me suitably sobered.»
«Well done Dulci. Very nice application of iclone»
«Simple but very effective and quite sobering.»
«and i thought dulciland was a theme park»
«I watched twice:-)
The second time I found the poem online to 'read along' with your voice:-)
I like what you did with your voice by the way:-)
Nice visuals to compliment the poem as well:-)
I enjoy reading poems too,although I tend to prefer poems of the "There once was a girl from Nantucket" variety hahaha;-)»
«Powerful stuff, good sound design idea.»
«Nice echo effect also a great poem from a great poet.»
«Very evocative Dulci and darkly artful.»
«Very moving and exceptionally well done!»
«i feel soo sad now dulci, well done »
«The echo effect made it melodic, the low note was forlorning and forboding, and the rain was meloncholy. I need a drink now!
K4»