Hitman Blues
Duration: 11min 44sec
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Submitted: 5 years ago
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Hitman Blues is my Crime/Drama/Action film. This is my 3rd Vo film. I hope you enjoy it! I had fun making it! Warning some Strong Language and Violence are in this film.
The Cast
Uber
Bella
Chris62
Josephkw
Macwemyss
Soda89
Rayne16
Me
Mods from 8-Eyedbaby,TheMovies 3D, and Machinimods.
Mods by 6-Headedmonster,Samyhouse,Frassmovies,
Pookashells,Darkwolf176,Uber, and Gargamel93.
Music from Newgrounds and my record player ;)
Music by Pink Floyd,Johnny Cash,Elvis Presley, The Rolling Stones,MaestroRage, and MusicWizard.
Special Thanks to the Cast. Thank you!! Thank you for your time. Please comment! Till next time,
Peace out and Rock on!!
SMOKSTIR13
«cool, peace and rock n' roll»
«Hey I was just stopping by and I saw your message...
Well what is there to say, this film was amazing! I have seen a lot of TM films and this shows how far it has come, and that it truly is still alive. I hope you take it to heart when I say you have talent and I hope you keep going. I loved TM and its directors like you that have always made me do so. But, thanks for your time, and good luck with everything in the future!
-Nick»
«Great job smokstir.
I agree about the music being a little to loud were the dialogue is.
Other then that i think uber did a great job with the lead role also the cast also very good plot.
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«Nice looking film!»
«Great job!
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«Pretty well done. Some of the lines were hard to make out, while the police siren was much louder than it needed to be, but that aside the pacing held interest, and the soundtrack gave it a unique life to it. »
«Nice fast-paced story. Good VO work by the whole cast. Great use of mods and nice editing. My only critique would be that some of the dialogue was hard to hear over the music. Next time work on that.
Overall, nice work! This was fun to watch. Keep up the good work. »
« Cool little flick there my man!»
«Cool fast-paced action galore! I did have a hard time hearing some of the dialogue though since the loud music was competing with it--I suggest lowering the music volume whenever someone's speaking. Other than that, nice job!»
«Great work Smokstir! I think you did a brilliant job on this. The voiceovers were great by the whole cast. Nice to see Uber in a leading role for once, he voiced his character well. I really think you should have VOs in your films more often as it just adds so much. I really liked the story, especially the ending. The music was great too. My only criticism is like people are saying, sometimes the music didn't quite fit the scene and often drowned out the VOs. Otherwise you did a terrific job on this. I really liked your editing and camerawork. I really enjoyed it, well done!
***** - 5 stars»
«I liked it
The plot was great, as well as the acting. Good job 
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«Nice job smokstir! Enjoyed watching it.»
«2 Thumbs Up !!!»
«Opps I misspell stories XD»
«Thanks guys for your comments and reviews!
@Floydier Yes I did write the script man. I love storys about hitmen and I like to watch crime films. So you know?»
«This was fun. I liked the camera work and pace of the film. there were some minor editing flaws but nothing distracting. I enjoyed it. I agree with some reviewers that at times the music didn't quite match, or was a bit too loud, but not too distracting for me.
Nice work!»
«I have to say that was very enjoyable!! I loved the story and theme of the entire movie, it drawed me in - and I did see this on FB last night but I wanted to wait and give this a watch when I had the time... anyway:
A couple of things I didn't like about it but I will start out with a few of the things I loved about it. First off, the music, right off the start, Pink Floyd The Wall. A personal favorite...which was NOT off the original album I believe so props for that being original and something new! I enjoyed a lot of the other classic rock tunes too, but maybe could have had some soundtracks in it but ah well, still very great sounding wise, and the sound effects were awesome. The voice actors also did a brilliant job!
Another thing I liked about it was the pacing and story but it was also something I didn't like however - the editing - it could have been a lot tighter then it was, I know editing in the Movies or Movie Maker (not sure what you used) but I know it is very difficult if you don't have a better editing program to work with. They can be expensive and are hard to learn at first.
Although I have to say with what tools you did use, brilliant job for what it is, and maybe I would like to collaborate with you in the future!
I have a question, did you write the script? It's awesome!
Anyway - 4.5 from me!»
«Good job Smokstir
This was fun!»
«I enjoyed watching, loved your choice of music, although i agree it did on occasions hinder the dialogue. Nice work, look forward to your next one!»
«I enjoyed this one. A nice actioner with some good acting and mods. I have some issues with it but I'll start off with the positives.
Nice lead performance by Uber, and by the rest of the cast. The writing was pretty good, though some of the dialogue could have been cleaned up a bit.
The directing was handled very well, as was the editing. However, I do have a couple of complaints.
I do like the use of music in this film, but some of the music didn't fit with the scene, and ended up being very distracting. For example, Presley's lighthearted "Blue Suede Shoes" didn't work when Wolf was preparing to kill Vladmir.
Also relating to the music, it occasionaly drowned out some of the dialogue, not a huge issue, but still a bit annoying.
Despite a few minor flaws, this is a fun action film, with a good cast and with some nice mods on display. You have a very unique style, with your directing and use of music, something we can't get enough of here.
Nicely done, Smokstir, good work!
4.5/5»