«not a bad flick, just work on technique and audio direction.»
A SuperHero with a difference. He's good, but he's used to being very very bad.
« Chris62 and samyhouse ,
Thank you for your comments. Especially appreciated when they come from artists who I admire and who are heavily committed to projects of their own.
The reason I threw down a first draft was twofold:
1) confirmation that the concept intrigued
2) areas that needed to be improved
Thanks for listening, now I have to get back to work
«I'm sorry, but it wasn't that good. There was some "noise" on the dialog, the movie didn't have any rythm, and that make it boring. There was a lot of cuting problem too and music choice was not maybe the best one.
But really, becarefull with editing (cutting). I don't know if you have expension pack Stunt and effect, but if you have, please, try to move you camera a little and choose some better position for it, the camera will help you to give some rythm.
Hope this will help. Good luck on your next one.»
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