Deaugh Greaugh
Duration: 7min 15sec
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Submitted: 9 years ago
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Unlike most other heroes, this one has been very very bad. This video is kinda crazy and believe me, the next one is even stranger-you've been warned.
Making this was just a lot of fun. I hope you find it entertaining.
...jerry
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superhero
spiritwarrior
«not a bad flick, just work on technique and audio direction.»
« Chris62 and samyhouse ,
Thank you for your comments. Especially appreciated when they come from artists who I admire and who are heavily committed to projects of their own.
The reason I threw down a first draft was twofold:
1) confirmation that the concept intrigued
2) areas that needed to be improved
Thanks for listening, now I have to get back to work
...jerry
»
«I'm sorry, but it wasn't that good. There was some "noise" on the dialog, the movie didn't have any rythm, and that make it boring. There was a lot of cuting problem too and music choice was not maybe the best one.
But really, becarefull with editing (cutting). I don't know if you have expension pack Stunt and effect, but if you have, please, try to move you camera a little and choose some better position for it, the camera will help you to give some rythm.
Hope this will help. Good luck on your next one.»
«Good movie Jshoot. »