«Ok.. For your first movie this was pretty good. It had a structure, a decent plot and the voice-acting was ok, though not without its faults. I liked the use of the in-game music and the pacing and structure of the film was pretty good. There were a lot of errors though, such as the boss's hair, the fact that people were watching modern tvs (tv wasn't available for most people back then, they usually listened to the wireless for entertainment), etc. The idea of "buying a bank" was also kinda ridiculous. I mean, he paid the guy $100,000 and then got to take what money he wanted out of the vault... How does that work? And surely the cashier wouldn't have the authority to sell the bank to some random who came in with a bit of cash. I think you could have gotten more than two voice actors for this movie too. Try posting a casting call at the forums next time as I'm sure people would be happy to help.
Overall though, not bad for your first movie. It had a decent plot and it was well structured. Well done and keep on filming
«Not bad for your first movie there was some problems the vos where pretty good but there was some clicking noises in the vos. also i had problems with the script SAM Adams was not around as a beer in 1945 also the hair style of the mafia boss. If you work on those small things your movie would be much better. I'll be watching for the next one.
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«Ok.. For your first movie this was pretty good. It had a structure, a decent plot and the voice-acting was ok, though not without its faults. I liked the use of the in-game music and the pacing and structure of the film was pretty good. There were a lot of errors though, such as the boss's hair, the fact that people were watching modern tvs (tv wasn't available for most people back then, they usually listened to the wireless for entertainment), etc. The idea of "buying a bank" was also kinda ridiculous. I mean, he paid the guy $100,000 and then got to take what money he wanted out of the vault... How does that work? And surely the cashier wouldn't have the authority to sell the bank to some random who came in with a bit of cash. I think you could have gotten more than two voice actors for this movie too. Try posting a casting call at the forums next time as I'm sure people would be happy to help.
Overall though, not bad for your first movie. It had a decent plot and it was well structured. Well done and keep on filming
*** - 3 stars»
«Not bad for your first movie there was some problems the vos where pretty good but there was some clicking noises in the vos.
also i had problems with the script SAM Adams was not around as a beer in 1945 also the hair style of the mafia boss.
If you work on those small things your movie would be much better.
I'll be watching for the next one.
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