«Very nice pacing. Nice camera work. Good suspense. Unnecessary cursing but I won't say anything more about that. This story sounds familiar, like some old radio show. Use of Pachabel is in good spot. Overall a good style of movie-making. I'm usually not into ghost stories, they have to be this short for me to get into them. Mother of daughter-ghost sounds too young,maybe actresses should have been switched? OKOkay, I understand you're trying to scare, but you could have gone positive and have the ghost-girl rise up in the air, her spirit finally free, and I guarantee you more people would have been happier about your video, because it had a happier, constructive, ending. Just a scary voice stands for hopelessness. We have enough of that in the world.»
A TWIST IN THE NIGHT
I realise how difficult it is to write a script for a 10 minute film, build up characters, storyline and the suspense in such a short period of time. I am trying to work on a 10 minute film script myself, without much luck!
So well done! Good animation, editing, cameras etc. My only minor criticisim is the dark sections of the film were just a little too dark. I barely could see anything (including the character in the shot) at times. Maybe a little more light in those scenes, but otherwise well done!»
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