Ring of Time - Episode 2
Duration: 27min 06sec
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Submitted: 10 years ago
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This is the second episode to my Ring of Time series that is based on my novel, Nuove Terra's Ring of Time.
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Fantasy
«Great job on the second episode Squirrely!
I look forward to the next one
★★★★★ - 5 Stars»
«Excellent episode. Much better than the first, and I enjoyed the first one a lot. The audio was much much better this time around, and really did justice to the great voice acting on show here. Once again, Tom does an outstanding job of carrying the tale in a difficult role. Just goes to show why type-casting works. As always, the effects work was spot on. I was particularly impressed by the transformation scene.
As a small negative, at times I found the pacing just a little slow and some scenes (the classes) were a little repetitive, and possibly could have been cut down, but I can totally understand that being the author, you would find it difficult to cut bits out of your script, and having read the book, I know you already have missed out quite a few scenes.
Overall, this is a well-crafted and charming story well told through some great voice acting by Tom and a carefully woven script. The music and effects were top-notch and I am anxiously awaiting the next installment
***** - 5 stars»
«Good script also nice sfx pretty cool dragon.
Your cast did a good job also.
Nice work squirrelygirl.»
«I enjoyed that - the time flew by.
It was interesting seeing the various classes. I particularly liked the teacher who said something like "turn to page 16" and then magicked a book into his hands. The "familiar" scene was also very well made.
Very good job on the dragon - that can't have been easy, but it's paid off. »
«Great production, pretty hard to translate that script to machinima and u did great. Great potential, I loved. Music background nicely used, cams and backs and story. 10/10»
«Enormous energy to translate your novel into machinima. Surely, Shirley, you can revel in this in depth demonstration. Way to go! Your devotion is certainly noted!
K4»
«It's marvelous to see a writer slowly realizing their vision through machinima! Great acting and magical effects that are very well integrated to the movie.
-S »
«It's marvelous to see a writer slowly realizing their vision through machinima! Great acting and magical effects that are very well integrated to the movie.
-S »
«More hard work paying off in this episode. I like the fact that you've taken the time to populate the world of your story and establish the characters whilst developing the plot slowly rather than plunging straight into it. One of the things that really brings it to life is the size and quality of the cast, all of whom were excellent (special shout-out this ep to Mac for his comic timing and Sisch for her sinister, vampish femme fatale.) As ever, the visuals were beautifully realised. Good work!»
«Nicely done, Shirley - having read the book, I'm really enjoying watch you bring it to life.
Great job by your cast, some nice effects, and a really good musical bed - I'll be anxiously awaiting episode 3!»