«I felt the characters were bland and the story really confusing. I like some of the freecam scenes. Music is need to. To me you had a great intro but falls short afterwards. I don't know if you were juts putting to much ideas together. Like Konradin use music it makes the differnce in the movie.»
«Yo are seemling yust beginning. therefore hints may be useful.
the Technical point: Stop the mumbling. Use music too. Loog, that the charakters are set in the right position. I had sometimes the feeling, that they are werong. One comes in one scene from the left, the next picture shows him coming from the right. The subtitles are too quick.
And the story? Sorry, I understand nothing. Why is the wulf in the ship? What is he doing there? Why? Someone is shooting him, five minutes later he lives aga in?
Why is the ship exploding? After the explosion, it seemes undamaged? And why you changed the sets of the ship? Afterwards it looks different. And when it is an other ship, where did they find it? and why?
You should write in the beginning an introduction, at last. And the story should have a clear structure, so that you could follow this story.
Sorry, a nice try, but not such a good movie.
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