«Having been a fan of you and your bro since the beginning, I was pleasantly pleased when macwemyss shared this flick with me. Having just learned about the author on DCMF, just made me burst at the seams. Now that I know the back story to this piece, this flick takes a special place in my favorites. Keep interpreting Breck's work, and I'll continue enjoying it!»
I really liked how you filmed this short the white backdrop worked for the story you where telling also your narration of the story was very good.
There was some sound problems but i think that was because you upload with a wmv file try quicktime file on your next upload there's been some problems with wmv files with sound.
I enjoyed your movie and would like to see more of your work.
Welcome to TMU.»
«Superb. Absolutely stunning work here. I thought the whole premise of the film was just incredible, and although I figured out the punchline fairly early on, it was still a pleasure to see the events unfold. Like Howie says, the simplicity of the shot selection and the set served as a fantastic backdrop for what was really a much more complex story. There were no gimmicks or distractions, which really allowed you to flesh out the character of Gene and his thought processes. I loved how the monotony of the shots and the way that the VOs ran continuously into each other was very effective in representing the way Gene no longer has any sense of time, and how his days seem to blur into each other to become one long stretch of time. The VO sounded very natural, not overacted, nor underacted. Just sounded right. There were a few problems with the quality but to be honest that didn't bother me. The aspect ratio seemed stretched vertically for some reason as well, but again not a big issue. I thought the echo was a great way of portraying the emptiness and the lonely atmosphere, and I also thought the music fitted perfectly. Overall just a brilliant short movie. I loved it
***** - 5 stars»
«I have to say, dispite - in fact possibly because of - the simplicity of this production, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Well thought out and nicely scripted, the only downside was the slightly under-par recording quality of the VOs.
However, the performance was good and the progression steady. Very well done!»
«The sound is really not good sorry. Its hard to follow this machinima for that reason. The main idea of your machinima is great i think but the developpment take too long time to be really amazing. Some music seems to be inapropriate and too loud. Your shots are too neutral and where is the fish ? ^^»
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