«Unfortunatley a very bland trailer. The writing was pretty bad from what I saw. And the music drowned out the VO's. I didnt think the music worked well, either. You could do alot better.»
The script was terrible first off. The way you had a question someone jumps out a window, it just dosen't make much sense to the viewer. Try to explain more about the movie as far as I know there's a fire and the marines are shooting things out of a helicopter. In that scne it shows the marines shooting which is fine, but if you look in the backround what do you see? Not buildings. Not streets. A green screen. I think you should take more time doing the writing and editing. This trailer could've been better. Also, try to equal out the vo's.
«Hi Jake. I won't repeat the criticisms left by the other reviews, but definitely do heed them. The music was sweet though (as long as it doesn't drown out the VO's). Since I'm in the cast and have a clue to the storyline, I know you can pull it together to make a good film. Just take your time--we'll wait for this. »
«That wasn't so good Jake, the narration sounded like a robot and the sound quality of it was poor, and the camera shots went through the buildings and well I really hope the proper movie isn't like this, just make sure there are no flaws in the final movie, edit well and make sure everything is clean, polished and dusted for the final cut.
Good Luck Jake!
** - 2 Stars»
«Dialog drowned out by music. Camera shots through buildings. Clips of scenes that don't tell me anything about the film itself. Narration that that enfisized more on the casts names, rather than what the film is about. Personally, I'd rather hear the young voice of the narrator than the classic "add pitch to my voice to make me sound older, but actually makes me sound like the guy from The Silence of the Lambs" bit. Put the lotion in the basket indeed.
Not much of a trailer as it tells me nothing and seemed to be thrown together.
Good luck on the project.
«A Few problems with this trailer-
1) City Flythrough it went through buildings
2) Couldn't hear VOs sometimes over music
3)Some problems with camera angles in certain shots
These probs can be fixed by the final movie easily, and I'm looking forward to it
Nice music choice
VOs were low, but of a good standard»
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