GIRLFRIEND FROM HELL
Duration: 8min 13sec
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Submitted: 9 years ago
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I decided to try a different storyline, so this is my Dark Romance Drama.
To tell you the truth...I could really use some help with the voice overs. I've got a ton of scripts written. If anybody is interested in participating, then contact me. I need both male and female voices.
Well enough of that. In case your interested...the girl in this story...well she’s a carefree spirit but has a hard time expressing her feelings when showing interest in the opposite sex.
This is…the Girlfriend from HELL.
Also…I was planning on doing a series about this couple called Sinner and the Saint, so this story would be how they first met and the next story would be one of their many adventures together.
Even though I called this story Girlfriend from Hell, she's not really his girlfriend during this storyline, but as I said...it leads into the next story segment where she is his girlfriend.
Yeah I know...he's a priest and I've been told their not supossed to have a girlfriend...but that opens the door for another story.
«Thanks for the compliments.
Just a comment on the punk dudes fight scene....The reason she didn't hit the punk dude in the first place was because she wanted to be saved by the priest. The damsel in distress. But when he didn't do too well in the fight, she had to take up for him.
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«Lol, great stuff again here. You seem to have a talent for creating these really clever and funny stories. I thought your voicework was great here again, especially as the girl lol. The priest is right, she is crazy. I thought the camerawork was great, and the editing was excellent. I really loved the opening titles too. Your sound design was impeccable as always, as was the music. I thought the scene with the punk dudes was funny, although I didn't understand why she didn't just lamp him in the first place lol

Great job, keep on filming
***** - 5 stars»
«Nice work you did a great job with sound design also editing.
Also great story. »