«This science fiction film has some potential, but the spelling mistakes are absurd and the lack of punctuation and development of characters makes the film all the more unrewarding. I also don't understand the end of the film with the three random monsters saying Mazel Tov (here spelled "mozultof), a Jewish phrase meaning congratulations or good luck, for no discernable reason. Although it is only your second movie, and therefore thesilliness of this video can be forgiven. 2/5»
«Can't elaborate much on what I said in the previous comment on Hobo Forest; spelling for subtitles is a MUST; I'm sure we can all forgive the occasional typo, but as said below it's a major problem if you are going to use subbies. Other than that, all positive, really; you show some real promise with the angles you get (although try and avoid overdoing it too much); story was a bit "hmmm" but that will come with time and practise, as will the rest.
I do, however, think you have the potential to shine; with a bit more practise and thought, I reckon you could be blowing our socks off in a few months »
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