Plot was a tad spotty, but the scenes were strung together well. Sound levels were a bit up and down, one minute quiet on the voices, the next booming out the music and drowning them out (and the different music samples were of differing qualities). Nice use of sets (and some VERY nice and clean cut edits from one shot to another, big thumbs up there!).
Suggestions for next one; run all your audio through Audacity first to get them all levelled and clean before using them so the volume doesn't clash... that's about it, really! Everything else was pretty well done and I'm looking forward to seeing the next one... this looks like another potential winner here!»
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