«Hmm... I think maybe you had a story when you started... so - is this a trailer??»
Defective Charley Strange
«Nice work Gary, good to see you expand your horizons! I really liked the graphical detail here, especially the cat and the pile of rubbish on the street. Voices were good too.
One thing I would say is be careful not to "over-animate" your characters, because in real life during dialogue scenes actors tend not to move very much, especially in sequences like this one where not very much is going on.. so don't be afraid to leave them standing still for a bit if it helps the viewer concentrate more on what they're saying.
Otherwise, looking good so far. Can't wait to see where this goes from here! »
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