«The story felt a bittle too rushed towards the end for me. The overall production was decent but not outstanding. I gave it 3 stars.»
«GOOD: Music And Vos were good. Good Story.
BAD: The first convo with Andy/Michel was entierly too fast it dosent sound natural at all. if you were tring to shorten the film by taking out silence in the dialouge this was a bad place to do it. also an occasional glitch in sound from vos and music not too bad though.»
«First of all, it's great seeing you delve into MS. This for the most part was handled pretty well, with the exception of a few glitches here and there with some frames. I liked the story and originality, which really made me want to know more about what where it was all leading up to.
Some of the profanity was unexpected and could have at times been avoided all together but overall, there were some moments that made me chuckle.
Overall, this was a solid attempt to create a mystery. good job!»
«This was a very original movie, with decent execution. It moved slow at times, and I think a lot of that had to do with the music. Some of the lines sounded a bit awkward too. Other than that though I enjoyed it. I liked the story a lot, and it had me interested. Nice job overall.»
«Nice concept! I felt the pacing was effective in creating mystery and suspense. I agree that the f-bombs did not seem to serve a good purpose here and that a better sound design and music could have improved the movie a lot. The cast was great and the camera work was generally appropriate. Nice Job, Jake! »
«Ok Jake you did pretty good for your first moviestorm movie but the script had a lot of f bombs in it i agree with Ben.
Also you needed better sound design or music in the background.
Fires burning in the fire place but no sound.
Work on your scripts a little more and sound design in your movies.
Keep on filming.»
«So yes.. let's see here.
IMO, I felt like this script had a little too much profanity than it should have and from the sound of it, some of the VAs didn't feel comfortable acting with it too. The sound design needed some work, like rage and allpoint said, use ambient sound effects too. It makes all the difference. At the beginning, the music suddenly cuts out, a slow fade out would have worked out. Some of the camera selections were pretty good, a few short shots needed some work. I muted it the second time to see it works and it told the story.
I love a good twist and in my opinion and it worked. Overall this was a pretty decent little flick here.
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