«Very impressive work. I really liked the photo backgrounds together with the 3d props to create your environments. Also swell to get a non western take on the thriller/espionage tale. A bit long and a hiccup or two exist but a very enjoyable feature overall.»
«Nice job Lux. I watched it straight through and it held my interest the whole way. There was defiinitely a degree of intrigue in not knowing how the story was going to play out. The only thing that took some of the tension out of it was knowing the lead character was going to survive due to the first person introduction. Nice use of backgrounds as well to give those of us who are all to familiar with the Moviestorm stock sets something a different look and feel. All the VO actor perfomances were great including your gender bending role :-)»
«Thanks for your comments so far. I'm always wary of inflicting lengthy pieces on other people because I know what it is to have a low boredom threshold! So many thanks for your attention, and yes, I'm also looking forward to making parts 2 and 3, and will do my utmost not to fall into the weak sequel trap so many movies get caught by. »
«This is a great piece of moviemaking. The camerawork was excellent, characters believable and the story kept me engrossed for the whole 30 minutes. Quite possibly the longest I've managed to stay glued to a machinima movie without skipping forward - or falling backwards There were a few things I thought could have been improved on, but in a half hour movie of this quality, they're just not worth mentioning. Bring on parts 2 and 3.
Nice job on sound effects and music.
Vo work was very good as well as camrea work.
Very good story.
I don't agree with mcornetto on the glitches every software has it's problems and no movie is perfect not even Hollywood movies.
I thought the edting was done well.
«Nicely done. I have to admit that I was dreading sitting through a half-hour machinima, but you kept the pace up nicely. You also did a great job of giving your characters, some, well, character. The story kept my interest and the dialogue was very good too.
The only comments I had were that it could have been a wee bit tighter. There were a few MS and editing glitches here and there but you can never get rid of them 100%. I just noticed a minute ago on another site that you said you use vegas for editing. If so, I can probably throw some tricks your way for editing them out or smoothing them over. Let me know.
Once again, well done.
«I really enjoyed watching this! I like the little tricks you used to show her grabbing items, opening the locker and things like that. You did an excellent job and visually it is beautiful.
Thanks for letting me be a part of it (though my accent sounded kinda weird sometimes lol). »
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