«Nice little experiment, you would have been better using some close up shots as the camera was generally to far out. Also work a little on post production, with effort you could add sound fx to make those punches seem to have more impact, and maybe some battle grunts.»

«That's a very interesting test.»

«Not bad Jake, looks like you're getting to grips with MS pretty well. I think for a fight scene it was filmed all a little too far away from the action and needed tighter editing but the music was great. I especially loved the way it built up to the finale and the timing of the gunshot was great. Good work Jake, keep on filming

**** - 4 stars
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